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Double page spread
These are my original photos, before editing. Here was can see 3 different backgrounds. And the 3 different locations might be sued throughout the magazine. (click on image for full screen)
Flat plan layout
First draft with feedback
Design element ideas
Feedback:
There should be a red box under the backstory of the arrtist so it follows the housesyle of the magazine, and so the magazine is allowed to flow more.
The article is too crowded, you sjpuld break up the text by adding some design elements and maybe gaps between the question and answer.
make the questions stand out so we can defferentiate between the question and the answer.
make the red boxes connect
add some design element ideas.
add page numbers that are the same on the contents page
change image of 2nd DPS but still keep a musical instrument.
Put the pull quote on the first DPS to break up the text.
Colour scheme is consistent throughout the magazines. therefore I can tell that the front cover, contents page and DPS all relate to each other.
magazine identity which is kept consistent on every page and design element.
Correct page number in relation to contents page.
Speech marks using a different font
Drop caps at the start of the article.
Consistency of font used when her name appears. And a crown to reinforce the idea that she is queen.
Colums and black bar to break up text.
